One of my best pals in Blogland is Nicole from Ninja Mom. She runs a series every Friday called "Character Assassination Carousel" where each participant rips a classic piece of children's literature to shreds.
My original intent was to roast those stupidly-sadsack-grammatically-challenged creatures from the Hundred Acre Woods, otherwise known as Pooh & Friends.
But then I realized today is Dr. Seuss's birthday and it would be weird not to give him his due.
This posed a bit of an issue because I wasn't sure it was appropriate to insult a dead man. And as far as children's authors go, I kind of like the guy.
So… instead I decided to rewrite his book.
Authors never mind when you rework their words, right? Especially after they're dead?
I chose "Oh, The Places You'll Go!" because really, it's way too vague for my taste. What are these "great places" exactly? The pediatrician's office? The sale rack at Baby Gap? Where's this "mountain" I'm supposed to move? And why oh why is success "98 and 3/4 percent guaranteed"???
Overpromise much, Dr. Seuss?
A reality-based version of Dr. Seuss's last and best-selling book is clearly what we need and since this is a parenting blog, I'm writing it specifically as on 'ode to new moms'.
Ready? Deep breath….
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Congratulations!
Today is your day.
You're off to great places.
You're off and away.
You have spit-up in your hair.
You have pee on your shoes.
You can steer yourself
to any place (with a changing table) you choose
You're not on your own.
You don't know what's to come.
Because you've got a new baby
that's about to steal all your fun!
You'll look up and down streets.
Look 'em over with care.
About some places you'll say,
"Oh! I miss going there!"
With your head full of mush
and shoes aching your feet
you'll wear sweatpants outdoors
as if admitting defeat.
And you may not find
any other mothers you like.
In that case, of course
you'll have to talk to your tike!
He won't respond.
Babies rarely do.
So you'll talk to yourself
saying MOO, BAH and GOO.
And then things start to happen.
He'll sit up, he'll stand.
And you'll act like these feats
are the second coming of man.
Oh! The places you'll go!
To 'Buy Buy Baby' and more!
You'll be confronted with bottles
swaddles, breast pumps GALORE!
You won't lag behind
because you've spent over a grand
on a ridiculous stroller
that was in high demand.
You'll be judged by other mothers
for your lack of routine.
You'll secretly wonder
how your friend's house is so clean.
But one look at his face
and it's totally worth it.
If you went back in time
you wouldn't do anything different.
Except when you don't.
Because sometimes you won't.
I'm sorry to say so,
but sadly it's true.
The puke
and the poop
can all get to you.
You'll hide in the bathroom.
You'll fight with your spouse.
You'll want to run screaming
right out of your house!
Your hair will fall out.
The baby weight lingers.
You'll try your best
not to point any fingers.
You'll remember a time
when you used to shower
and didn't wake up
at such an ungodly hour.
You'll wear the same pants
four, five, six days in a row.
You'll look around wondering
if anyone knows.
The diapers will pile
higher than heaven.
On a scale up to ten
the stench is eleven!
Then a stomachbug will tear
it's way through your home.
And you'll think this is it!
Engrave my tombstone!
But just as you hit
an all-time lowest low,
you will say to yourself
"Not me! No! No! No!"
The puke and the poop
may make a big mess.
How the diaper genie broke
is anyone's guess.
Yes, it's been many months
without a good rest,
but my baby—
well… he is the BEST!
And then you'll take on
a new kind of stance.
One who doesn't leave
their child's future up to chance.
Oh! The places he'll go!
There's a genius right here!
With proper instruction
he can skip many years!
The advanced things he says
off the top of his head,
are surely the skills
leading up to pre-med!
Rich! He'll be rich!
As rich people can be!
And then all my friends
will be jealous of me!
Except when they don't.
Because sometimes they won't.
I'm afraid that sometimes
you'll have to admit
that your baby
just can't make that square blue peg fit.
And like it or not,
you'll come back to reality.
Where you'll realize that motherhood
has taken part of your sanity.
But on you will go
though the sippy cups leak.
On you will go
though lack of sleep makes you weak.
On you will go
wiping snot off your kid's nose.
On you will go
because it's the life that you chose.
Onward to many
a preschool event.
Though your pockets are drained
from the last commitment.
Soon you will realize
with care and great tact
that Life is nothing but
a Great Balancing Act.
Before you know it,
you're a seasoned parent at bat,
telling the woman with the newborn
to put on his hat.
Please never forget
to be nice to new mothers.
You don't have anybody
if you don't have each other.
So… be you helicopter,
attachment or montessori,
or an organic French tiger mom
who never does worry,
you're off to great places!
Today is your day!
Your children are waiting.
They'll all be okay.
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Damn. Dr. Seuss books are kind of long, no?
Check out all the books in Ninja Mom's Character Assassination Carousel— including "Runaway Bunny", "The Giving Tree" and the creepiest of the creepy, "Love You Forever". They all got a much harsher sentence than mine.
Last week Dr. Cynicism skewered The Wonderful Wizard of Oz and next week it's Jessie's turn from Jester Queen. I can't wait to see what she'll pick.
(Pick Pooh, please!!!)
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If you're a Seuss fan and would like to honor his birthday properly, check out my post on Babble today called "For the Love of Dr. Seuss". It features 15 very interesting facts about 15 of Seuss's most popular books.
For instance, did you know "Yertle the Turtle" was about Hitler?
Anti-Hitler, obviously.
Dude, you should totally write a book!!!
I kinda want to print this out and hang it on my wall…..
wow! that’s amazing! great job! i still can’t figure out how you have the time to do this kind of stuff and blog on another site, AND have a full time job, AND a 2 year old!
Ilana, I’m tearing up! No shit. Sure, I’m a day or two behind on my anti-depressants, but STILL.
I am literally choking on coffee with the laughing (quietly, because I don’t want to alert the kids that the place I’ve gone is in the office to hide from them).
And also? It’s bizzarely touching. Ah, memory lane.
Thank you, thank you!
Your spoof’s simply grand!
Now off to mold children
Into a family rock band.
(I can’t see how else we’ll pay for med school.)
Yes – as any Gen X’er should know, there’s no reason to let the diaper stench be a 10 when we all know “IT GOES TO ELEVEN!” Awesomeness. You are perfection as always.
Well, in this instance, I went to San Francisco yesterday as part of a blog sponsorship and this is what I did on the plane. Took the book along and everything. It’s amazing what you can accomplish when you don’t have to entertain a two-year-old! Wrote the Seuss post for Babble as well.
To add further explanation, my day job is freelance and I am currently in between projects (have been since middle of February)— a new one starts up on the 15th. So that gives me a bit more time.
But it is still too much. Last month was my first time writing five posts a week for Babble and I almost lost my mind, so we’ll see what happens.
That was awesome!
This is fabulous. Well-written, hysterical, accurate, poignant. Just perfect. Love, love, love.
I like this way better than the original! My hat’s off to you!
This was seriously good stuff. Perfect spot-on satire and rhythm. So is your next project creating a collection of Dr.Seus parodies like this?? It should be. Please. Ellen
This. Is. Fantastic.
Okay, I was impressed with myself for this week’s re-writing of a Max & Ruby episode.
Girl, you just blew that shizzle out of the water.
THIS IS WHY I LOVE YOU.
I am gonna spread this post faster than a cold sore on a high school quarterback.
I love this!!! So awesome!! Looking forward to reading more!
That is so so so amazing.
Is it strange that I teared up a bit?
Must be one of those days.
Thank you for this.. sharing with anyone who’ll listen 🙂
I am so in awe of you. Your writing is amazing! Heartfelt and hilarious and honest. It just blows me away that you’re able to churn out so much quality so regularly – for two sites no less! And being a mom to a toddler on top of that! And being an Art Director on top of THAT! I’m more than a little envious, not gonna lie… I have nothing going on and yet I can’t seem to string two sentences together! Stuck in a rut. Maybe I should have a baby for inspiration? KIDDING.
Great rhymes and great content. Now someone illustrate it! I rewrote a classic once, but it was only night before Christmas. This was much harder. That book is long!
So completely brilliant. I’m with everyone else. Please publish this, so I can give it out as a New Baby Gift!
You are awesome as always. The flight explains a lot though because just like everyone else I was wondering how you had the time. I need to travel more!
Wow! I’m so impressed with your rhyming and cleverness. I mean, I knew you were clever, but to show it off so Seussically if pretty cool.
Now I want a podcast of you reading it out loud.
AWESOME!!!
You can’t prove that I hide in the bathroom or fight with my spouse.
(Can you?)
Crap.
XO
Bravo! Nice post. I think he’d be proud.
That is absolute genius! No joke, that should be in print so people can give it as a baby shower gift. And since I rarely say anything that isn’t at least a little sarcastic or snarky, you know I’m not just blowing sunshine and I must really mean it. Although I guess you can’t tell just from reading this that I’m not being sarcastic, but I’m telling you, I’m not. Really!
fantabulous! just found out a few weeks ago my daughter is pregnant, so plan on reading this at her shower!!! thanks – – it was great.
I totally agree. Awesome!
So glad you like. I was afraid it wasn’t nearly brutal enough. You should write one yourself — you are obviously a natural Seuss.
Thanks for having me participate!
I never saw Spinal Tap. Shhhh. Don’t tell anyone.
(Still know the reference though!)
Hmmm… I’ll give this some thought. My book about Mommy & Me Class? The Wiper in my Diaper? This could happen…
I watched two minutes of Max & Ruby at a friend’s house and wanted to shoot myself.
Thanks for the visual of Tim Riggins with herpes!
Inspiration babies are the new trend— you should TOTALLY have one. I know what I am going to do the next time I have writer’s block…
Thank you, Jen. So happy to see you are still reading.
My poem isn’t even nearly as long as the book. I couldn’t believe it as I was writing it. Finally, I just abandoned it and then came back to it at the end.
This might be able to be arranged. I will look into it.
You can accomplish a lot in six hours with no kids on a plane. It was actually the perfect thing to do.
Maybe a Mommy Shorts Show reading? I can’t imagine starting a podcast too. I have to draw the line somewhere!
I have a camera in your bathroom mirror. Don’t get creeped out. It’s for your protection.
If you don’t like it, why don’t you just say so?
🙂
Awesome! Tell your daughter I say congratulations!
I remember when we thought our kids was a genius. And then well, he wasn’t.
Nice work Mommy Shorts.
Max & Ruby are the Devil.
You are very welcome for the visual. I loved this piece!
Oh the giggles I did have!
So, so awesome!! I agree – it should totally be published and would make the perfect new baby gift!
Oh thank God. I never did really “get” the original version of this book. I like yours much better!
Love that you did this on Dr. Seuss’s bday. I think ol’ Theo would definitely approve.
And what is it with the judgy moms? I never had a routine either and I’m the mom who wonders how the ones with the clean houses do it! Get out of my head!!! (No, don’t! Stay! Let’s play Scrabble.)
Wow. Just… wow. That’s all I got. I’m speechless.
(That’s a good thing.)
I need to check out this Ninja Mom thing – I’m dying to rip on Maisy Takes a Bath. That little Tallulah person is WEIRD.
Clever, clever, clever. Sending it to all my friends. 🙂
Tearing up and laughing at the same time! I love your truth and humor. Seriously, I have a pregnant friend who needs this.
I think today is that bit in the middle where I don’t because I won’t, and I want to run screaming out of the house. An excellent updating of a timeless classic. May the Doctor forever remain corrected.
This is amazing! This piece should be included in a New Mom Survival Kit. Kudos.
That was an amazing read!
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